Este es un poema que estoy escribiendo a este lado del oceano.
Me sale en ingles aunque no tengo mucha idea y estara todo lleno de fallos (Juan Pi, Elia, Silvias, Patty, os invito a corregirme... o no, porque llevara una eternidad...). Bueno. El caso es que asi surgio expresarme ahora. No se por que. Lo voy ampliando y medio corrigiendo poco a poco. Esta es la version 2 y ya tiene titulo. EL RUIDO DEL SILENCIO.
THE NOISE OF SILENCE
XPired Windows' age of undoing in Madrid -love hate the second also XPiring,
ring!
The bar tender's name is Lucy.
Pennis meditates.
mind open wide as your legs exciting web-cams
somebody's singing from 40 years old record's sources,
the bar is empty as anger,
air is kinda' bitter blossom in the other side of that ocean of us: Conjunction
People are happy masks of consumption
unless they're 'wrong' black masks of consumption
Misticism is "not getting angry waiting for Sacramento's public transport".
There's a firmly vocation of love in that
unless you're on drugs like that lady Unhappy
angry with her childrens being angry with their mother
It takes as long to get to K. street as if you were in Prague
Europe
(Franz writing his last visionary unfinished novel: America:
getting to an end is our bitter duty)
Europe
Just elsewhere
Europe:
that place overseas quoted as a fancy country making succeed Woody Allen or Charles Bukowski
while even Spain will never be that of a country
burocrazy, paperwork is twentyfirst century's kind of kafkian feeling
The world is more espherical than ever
I'll do my best, Mr. K.
I'm just processing
Think of you every day
Tramway's late
and it is very cold in this irrigated desert
I'll forget about Saint Jhon of the Cross and start shoutin'
Nevertheless
when I get home
I'll call you just to say I love
you
while Madrid sun of yours meant to be mine too
is just risin'
and in Davis, California, it's just raining glue
and there's a cloud in San Francisco baptized with my name Confusion
chasing the sun with that "being bothered" look
just for being alone...
as if one had more than one body and space were somewhere meant to be filled,
as if time was a kind of conclusion that makes it disappear
and me,
an european being convinced of the lapidary truth of the last three verses,
convinced of the fact that love is the house of you, of all you's ever
and not this body, any body-project-of-corpse a house of the ever existing life,
or love,
or thuth,
or just what I'm trying with this faked noise of silence
It's a matter of comunication.
I would erase the whole Trinity from heaven just making love with
you
during an eternal second
my you
your you
Comunication
everybodies' you
A leave fall from my "in front of my home platano tree"
as you step on that very leave
in Madrid's pavement
This sounds kinda'llelluya.
We're toghether---
unless we're not----
in this planet tiny as the eye of my webcam
with that "love each other" way of funny looking
Your eyes are the eyes
and not that shitty web-cam annus.
Anyway.
Nevermind:
you always said you had a shit look.
Somebody is singing from 40 years old record's sources
and she seems to be closer
than you.
My you.
There is a cloud in San Francisco chasing the sun
and projecting it's shadow on the ground in Davis, California
it's been raining glue .
My hands are ready to stick with you the next neverending instant.
9 comentarios:
Hi, Dan... What the hell are you talking about? Ho do you feel???
Ok, I should improve my English.
Anyway, Good luck, my friend. Follow your own road... It is very nice to read your poems from the other fucking side.
Do not be imperialist!!!!
mua!
My you, you you.tú-tú, you-tú.youtube..
Aquí en la Notaría,
flotando tus palabras.
hora de la siesta, persianas bajadas, almo-hada y pantalones de pijama, ya he lanzado el grito: todos a dormiiiiiir!
Luego te veo.
Hey, Dani, un poema excelente, quien coño va a preocuparse de la gramática o la ortografía excepto los capullos perennes. Me alegro que estés ahí, bien y escribiendo. I love you too. A pity El Paso is so far away because I would love it. Hasta pronto.
Seguro que es un poema genial, como todos los tuyos. Espero que ya tengas tu espacio allí y nos vayas contando.
Besos.
te echamos de menos el martes. gran poema dani; veo que california te está sentando excelentemente. da recuerdos a los beats.
El poema no está mal Daniel, pero no es un poema formal, tiene errores que un aprendiz de académico como usted no se puede permitir..pero aki, ups, se me escapó una k a mi..jejeje tiene gracia..en el buko hay talento, pero no hay calidad. El a(e)spect(r)o formal del poema esta descuidado señor herrera, ups..la mayúscula..jejeje vaya pedito ortográfico con perdón..jaja
Una de humor Dani, de un mal crítico literario..jajaja estoy de broma y sabes quién soy..jajaja esta gracia nos gusta..el último Orient-art/ista del occidente conocido..vease santa pola y sus playas radiactivas..jajaja
Esta de puta madre the poem! Pero como sigas en inglés te quedas sólo, jajaja al no ser que te hagas un poema en formato Hip-Hop jajajaja
besos
Si fuera un capullo perenne te diría q probablemente you meant to say "leave falls" (hoja cae) and not "leave fall" (deja otoño)
Pero como eres demasiado bueno para mí te diré q el poema está fucking perfect and let me congratulate you for being so deeply poetic and astonishingly bold. Wether you write in english or spanish you still have the same poetic breathing, and both last poems were remarkable.
Thanks
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