21.9.08

THE NOISE OF SILENCE

Este es un poema que estoy escribiendo a este lado del oceano.

Me sale en ingles aunque no tengo mucha idea y estara todo lleno de fallos (Juan Pi, Elia, Silvias, Patty, os invito a corregirme... o no, porque llevara una eternidad...). Bueno. El caso es que asi surgio expresarme ahora. No se por que. Lo voy ampliando y medio corrigiendo poco a poco. Esta es la version 2 y ya tiene titulo. EL RUIDO DEL SILENCIO.



THE NOISE OF SILENCE


XPired Windows' age of undoing in Madrid -love hate the second also XPiring,


ring!


The bar tender's name is Lucy.

Pennis meditates.


mind open wide as your legs exciting web-cams


somebody's singing from 40 years old record's sources,

the bar is empty as anger,

air is kinda' bitter blossom in the other side of that ocean of us: Conjunction


People are happy masks of consumption

unless they're 'wrong' black masks of consumption


Misticism is "not getting angry waiting for Sacramento's public transport".

There's a firmly vocation of love in that

unless you're on drugs like that lady Unhappy 

angry with her childrens being angry with their mother


It takes as long to get to K. street as if you were in Prague

Europe

(Franz writing his last visionary unfinished novel: America:

getting to an end is our bitter duty)

Europe

Just elsewhere

Europe: 

that place overseas quoted as a fancy country making succeed Woody Allen or Charles Bukowski

while even Spain will never be that of a country

burocrazy, paperwork is twentyfirst century's kind of kafkian feeling

The world is more espherical than ever

I'll do my best, Mr. K.

I'm just processing

Think of you every day

Tramway's late

and it is very cold in this irrigated desert

I'll forget about Saint Jhon of the Cross and start shoutin'


Nevertheless


when I get home 

I'll call you just to say I love 


you


while Madrid sun of yours meant to be mine too

is just risin'

and in Davis, California, it's just raining glue 

and there's a cloud in San Francisco baptized with my name Confusion

chasing the sun with that  "being bothered" look

just for being alone...

as if one had more than one body and space were somewhere meant to be filled,

as if time was a kind of conclusion that makes it disappear

and me,

an european being convinced of the lapidary truth of the last three verses,

convinced of the fact that love is the house of you, of all you's ever

and not this body, any body-project-of-corpse a house of the ever existing life,

or love,

or thuth,

or just what I'm trying with this faked noise of silence

It's a matter of comunication.

I would erase the whole Trinity from heaven just making love with 


you 


during an eternal second


my you

your you

Comunication

everybodies' you


A leave fall from my "in front of my home platano tree"

as you step on that very leave

in Madrid's pavement


This sounds kinda'llelluya.


We're toghether---

unless we're not----

in this planet tiny as the eye of my webcam

with that "love each other" way of funny looking


Your eyes are the eyes

and not that shitty web-cam annus.


Anyway.

Nevermind:


you always said you had a shit look.


Somebody is singing from 40 years old record's sources

and she seems to be closer

than you.


My you.


There is a cloud in San Francisco chasing the sun

and projecting it's shadow on the ground in Davis, California

it's been raining glue .


My hands are ready to stick with you the next neverending instant.

9 comentarios:

Gonzalo, ciudadano dijo...

Hi, Dan... What the hell are you talking about? Ho do you feel???

Ok, I should improve my English.

Anyway, Good luck, my friend. Follow your own road... It is very nice to read your poems from the other fucking side.

Do not be imperialist!!!!

isabel dijo...

mua!

Elena dijo...

My you, you you.tú-tú, you-tú.youtube..
Aquí en la Notaría,
flotando tus palabras.
hora de la siesta, persianas bajadas, almo-hada y pantalones de pijama, ya he lanzado el grito: todos a dormiiiiiir!
Luego te veo.

Juan dijo...

Hey, Dani, un poema excelente, quien coño va a preocuparse de la gramática o la ortografía excepto los capullos perennes. Me alegro que estés ahí, bien y escribiendo. I love you too. A pity El Paso is so far away because I would love it. Hasta pronto.

Yuya dijo...

Seguro que es un poema genial, como todos los tuyos. Espero que ya tengas tu espacio allí y nos vayas contando.
Besos.

silvia dijo...

te echamos de menos el martes. gran poema dani; veo que california te está sentando excelentemente. da recuerdos a los beats.

Anónimo dijo...

El poema no está mal Daniel, pero no es un poema formal, tiene errores que un aprendiz de académico como usted no se puede permitir..pero aki, ups, se me escapó una k a mi..jejeje tiene gracia..en el buko hay talento, pero no hay calidad. El a(e)spect(r)o formal del poema esta descuidado señor herrera, ups..la mayúscula..jejeje vaya pedito ortográfico con perdón..jaja
Una de humor Dani, de un mal crítico literario..jajaja estoy de broma y sabes quién soy..jajaja esta gracia nos gusta..el último Orient-art/ista del occidente conocido..vease santa pola y sus playas radiactivas..jajaja
Esta de puta madre the poem! Pero como sigas en inglés te quedas sólo, jajaja al no ser que te hagas un poema en formato Hip-Hop jajajaja
besos

Jaime dijo...

Si fuera un capullo perenne te diría q probablemente you meant to say "leave falls" (hoja cae) and not "leave fall" (deja otoño)


Pero como eres demasiado bueno para mí te diré q el poema está fucking perfect and let me congratulate you for being so deeply poetic and astonishingly bold. Wether you write in english or spanish you still have the same poetic breathing, and both last poems were remarkable.

Thanks

Anónimo dijo...

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